and surely I am blessed

Demar Desu

I get to read and write 

whew… I get to love and fight 

no more complaining! 

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  • Mutley Ravishes

    It could all be so much worse. Let`s cherish this short time we have.

    • Demar Desu

      truly Mutley, I need to let go of this pain and anger… thank you for your response as always

    • sorenbarrett

      Taking liberty takes on new meaning with this poem. Well done Demar

      • Demar Desu

        Thank you Soren… I feel great

        • sorenbarrett

          Most welcome Demar

        • Bragee

          True blessings

        • mvvenkataraman

          Reading and writing develop our brain,
          Sibling rivalry is always there occurring,
          Even today, I don't remember those days,
          My brother physically punched me often,
          I love your poem and the end mainly,
          No more complaining- What a truth ?

          • Demar Desu

            Thanks for your response, when I was younger I was that brother too… I regret my violence so much but now I put my strength into things that heal instead of hurt… I say no more complaining but I hope to appreciate more… take care

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Amen, bro! Right there with you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

            • Demar Desu

              Yessir 🤟🏽🔥🏔️

            • Allie561

              Thank goodness we have something to express our emotions. Poetry has definitely saved me from acting out on anger. Great poem Demar!

              • Demar Desu

                I swear Allie! Thank you as always

                • Allie561

                  You’re welcome Demar!!



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