Nine Days Awake And Counting

Anthony Hanible

The hours stack like brittle glass

Each one trembling

Under its own weight

The world flickers

At the edges

A film reel slipping

Off its track

Shadows move first

Then light

Then whatever I am

In between

My thoughts wander

Without asking permission

Drifting through old rooms

I swore I’d locked

Touching memories

I meant to bury

Under cleaner snow

The mirror doesn’t argue anymore

It just watches

Patient

As if waiting for me

To remember

Which version of myself

I left behind

On day three

Or five

Or seven

Still

I keep going

A quiet pulse

In a body made of static

Counting the days

Like beads on a rosary

Hoping that somewhere

Between now

And whatever comes next

Sleep will find me

And call me

By my real name

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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem seems both surreal and existential. It unspools as if it were tempered wire springing off a reel. Nicely done

  • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

    Was the two Mys at the end on purpose? If it was I feel like it emphasizes… great poem nonetheless thouhh



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