Look at me circling around
Pathetic victim of gravity
Earth, me and you
There’s shame in that
Cz there’s no safety in that
Abused as I am
Freedom would mean death.
-Al
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Author:
Alan R (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 5th, 2026 13:58
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Tough poem… damn I felt it. The last line tells me that life means bondage… sigh… great poem
Thanks!
This puts opposition and paradox to the reader for understanding. Well done
Thanks a lot!
You are most welcome Alan
Wonderfully expressed. At times, living is like death, and the only escape from it is… well, actual death. Great work
Thanks a lot!
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