green leaves softly fall
fool seeks Buddha's place beneath
the silent tree
~ ~ ~
wave whispers
white bird's song
a cloud floats by
~ ~ ~
icy frost arrives
dawn mind in quiet reflection
spirit wakes anew
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Author:
Ellen (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 14th, 2026 11:05
- Category: Haiku
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Here's a piece of work that comes close to meeting the strict standards of '' Art '' .Which is a bit of change for us...
Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback!
First and last sandwich the unfamiliar nicely done
I appreciate that! The "unfamiliar" is where the transformation happens, so I wanted it to be held by a steady beginning and end 😊
You are most welcome
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