green leaves softly fall
fool seeks Buddha's place beneath
the silent tree
~ ~ ~
wave whispers
white bird's song
a cloud floats by
~ ~ ~
icy frost arrives
dawn mind in quiet reflection
spirit wakes anew
-
Author:
Ellen (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 14th, 2026 11:05
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 17
- Users favorite of this poem: Demar Desu

Offline)
Comments3
Here's a piece of work that comes close to meeting the strict standards of '' Art '' .Which is a bit of change for us...
Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback!
First and last sandwich the unfamiliar nicely done
I appreciate that! The "unfamiliar" is where the transformation happens, so I wanted it to be held by a steady beginning and end 😊
You are most welcome
Fab bunches of haikus. Got them all , just explain the buddha reference maybe. Kudos for this!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.