maybe a habit
my first poem was haiku
we are all nature…
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Damn it
- Category: Haiku
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Beautiful .
dhanyavaad
you know Hindi ?
I love haiku because they get to the point. Lovely work!
Me too
I love your style, bro. I love your inquisitive nature and the community you build. Keep it up, my friend. My first poem was not a haiku, but I have grown to love the form because it is an exercise in word economy. Not an easy task to distill a deep, profound idea down to 17 syllables. Your style is your style...it's your voice...and no one can take that from you, unless you let them. So, write on, bro! Write on!
Fuck yeah TRL
Write from the heart Demar despite what style it is
I will try my best
Good for you
Ah so I see you never did truly quit. It’s good to see another haiku from you. You cannot stop what’s part of your nature lol, hope to see more from you.
At this point I feel like it’s apart of me… just being me. Allie do you ever plan to put together a collection or book?
Well I have one collection currently of things I wanted to say but never did, and as for a book I have that too but I’m not sure if I want to publish it. I’ve been thinking about it but I think I’ll wait until I have a few more poems that I feel are good.
The future is exciting… hope it all comes together for you A
Thank you Demar, we’ll have to see!
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