green eyes and hatred
Jealousy in many forms
fuels the writers heart.
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Teddy.15 (
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Oh dearest, dearest Teddy! I see what you did here and I very much love and approve (not that you need my approval 😅). Another great senryu, my friend. You really do blow me away with them. Much love and respect to you, dear poet! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And yay, I get to be your first and second comments too! Bonus! 🤣💜
lol 🤣 thank you dearest Tristan I'm so glad you have enjoyed. 🌹
That my good friend is the dark side of the moon. I prefer the side I can see and love. Nicely written my friend
Indeed I agree dearest sorrenbarret 🌹 thank you dear friend. 🌹
Most welcome my friend
as long as it does not inspire spite, but gives rise to thoughtful questions - it is challenging to know that you are good enough to make people green eyed...
as long as it does not inspire spite, but gives rise to thoughtful questions - it is challenging to know that you are good enough to make people green eyed...
Never out of spite, although some with ego dogggeral David, he would have others believing it was out of spite and even encourage poets not to fave my stuff, but he does that to all poets on here, and what are faves and likes anyway? They are simply kindness to the fellow poet who has shared their heart, their thoughts and sometimes their pain, no gain from human kindness except a smile from the author but he hates smiles and Mojo's too, and quite frankly it just makes him look more sad and uninteresting. He drives all the ladies away with his smart hatred but I'm a survivor always have been. This was a challenge to me to write and nothing more. Thank you dear NafisaSB, I write for hobby not for wealth of money, no one on earth should ever feel envy of me or my scribbles. Happy Saturday 💜
if people are rude to them, give them back a subtle yet smart reply that will put them on their defensive..
if they are offensive, ignore, or block them
if encouraging - read their offerings and give them a thumbs up too
never let yourself be cowed down by anyone - head held high because you know your own worth so stay strong, undefeated and live life happily,,
have a good weekend, and take care...
I found this as I was roaming through files. I liked it and stopped to say so. Maybe it was the "Green eyes." - Phil A.
🤣 you...green eyes? Never in a million years
Thank you dear Phil fall upon my scribbles anytime 💜
No. Just made me think of someone.
that's the spirit my dear - show them what gems you can come out with...the more they burn, the more you get inspired....all the best always
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