Degrees

sorenbarrett

Electron held by glue to a nucleus who
Sticks to a brother to form a molecule mother
Held by a force they make a cell of course
That becomes a life, future parent husband or wife
Love that girl that gives me the hots 
Love ice cream and chicken soup in pots
Why do people think they are the only owners of glue
Might not levels have a little bit too

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  • Teddy.15

    lol as long as Trump is never cloned please level away! 🤣 What a wonderful piece

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Teddy for the review and comment it is most appreciated Teddy

    • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

      Great piece

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks so much Demar It is most appreciated.

      • Lorenz

        A text that sounds like it came straight out of a Pink Floyd delirium !

        • sorenbarrett

          And I always loved Pink Floyd

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Soren, this really lands…that blend of science and everyday life, especially with the idea of connection running through everything. It starts playful, then quietly turns reflective without losing its charm. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks so much Tristan for the read and comment yes it is a bit camouflaged but the idea of love being a virtual human quality does not work for me

          • orchidee

            Good write SB.

          • Kevin Hulme

            Like the way this Poem changes towards the end.
            And quite a novel way to describe someone.
            A good Write.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much Kevin for the review and comment it is always most appreciated

            • Priya Tomar

              Good write .

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks so much Priya for the review and comment it is deeply valued

              • Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi

                Simple things also possess glue. Just need a heart.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you Sviatoslav for the review and comment. Attraction is present even in the subatomic.



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