Potato soup

Allie561

Warmed up some leftover soup

I didn’t really want it you see

It wasn’t sounding too good to me

Yet when the spoon reached my lips

Oh was I glad to have it

Creamy and warm, I savored every bit

Life’s a little like leftover soup

It may seem gross but turns out to be a blessing

Keep life like that soup

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  • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

    Ah! I’ll take two big ladles of soup! Great poem

    • Allie561

      Coming right up! Thanks for the comment Demar!

    • sorenbarrett

      A great analogy well written in good form

      • Allie561

        Thank you very much Soren! It was just something quick I put together.

        • sorenbarrett

          You are welcome and sometimes it is inspiration that comes and goes quickly and must be put down before it evaporates

        • RSM0812

          Life is a blessing for sure. Nice comparison with soup. Savour every bite. 🙂

          • Allie561

            Thank you so much for your comment! I’m really glad you understood my analogy.



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