"Super Dave,
How can Little Me
Be so freakin` heavy?"
"Allow me
To demonstrate
Awareness deficit,
Mutley!"
"Ok. Away
You go"
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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This seems a little cryptic a tete a tete conversation maybe
Indeed! And shared with the wider world.
And the better for it
My friend, you balance humor and subtle edge really well here…you keep it playful, but there’s just enough sharpness to give it depth. The back-and-forth keeps it moving, and the tone never tips too far in either direction. Short, clever, and effective. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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