Heavy

Mutley Ravishes



"Super Dave,

How can Little Me

Be so freakin` heavy?"

"Allow me

To demonstrate

Awareness deficit,

Mutley!"

"Ok. Away

You go"

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  • sorenbarrett

    This seems a little cryptic a tete a tete conversation maybe

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Indeed! And shared with the wider world.

      • sorenbarrett

        And the better for it

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        My friend, you balance humor and subtle edge really well here…you keep it playful, but there’s just enough sharpness to give it depth. The back-and-forth keeps it moving, and the tone never tips too far in either direction. Short, clever, and effective. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Mutley Ravishes

          You know I like walking that razor`s edge, Tristan. Thanks for dropping by.

        • arqios

          Up, Up! And away!🙏🏻🕊️

          • Mutley Ravishes

            For sure! And like a towering tree that has deep roots too.

            • arqios

              Now there’s an excellent image!🌳🕊️🙏🏻

              • Mutley Ravishes

                It`s been on the periphery for a while, my friend!

                • arqios

                  Glad it made centre stage 🕊️🙏🏻



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