or only your own?
sigh… ah such entitlement
as if YOU birth you
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Fools… proud fools all fucking around me.
- Category: Haiku
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Number one is called that for a reason
Ah you know truth Soren
The birthing of self can be such a public spectacle and inescapably self-revelatory 🙏🏻🕊️
Can you explain further?
It’s kinda like actions speak louder than words, so the authentic self can be birthed very publicly in the most random of all situations for all to witness. That’s what your excellent poem brought to mind🕊️🙏🏻
Ahh I see what you are saying, thank you for your response
No worries, hope it wasn’t too vague. 🕊️🙏🏻
Well said. A fine Haiku
Thank you
Excellent!
I appreciate you
So true Demar, like gosh. I needed help at work the other day and a coworker was right next to me watching me struggle and sipping her coffee, the least that could’ve been done was ask if I need help. Nobody cares except about themselves, hopefully it can change.
Allie I hope one day you become a CEO; you understand how damaging it is to have a every man for themselves mindset… it’s unfortunate times we’re in
potent message wrapped in haiku...wow
I try
good to know..
enjoy the weekend..
LOL! Yes! Spot on, brother! An entitled world we live in, no? Fools indeed. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
each life is valuable - it's sad if one thinks only of self, and gives two hoots about others..though that is the trend in the world today unfortunately
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