Haiku (an ode to positivity)

Teddy.15

 

Birth of a new day 

 

refreshing, bringing new light
 
 
dark has no place here. 
 
 
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  • sorenbarrett

    I love this one Teddy it is metaphoric as well as literal and nicely imaged

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dear sorrenbarret 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Teddy

      • Katie B.

        I love a great Haiku! The say so much so succinctly. Perfect!

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear Katie B 🌹

        • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

          I will try my best today… thank you for this great reminder

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Amen. May it be so, dearest Teddy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Kevin Hulme

          This could mean many things. Peace being Light. And Darkness War.
          We all need Light in our lives.
          A fine Haiku.

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you dear Kevin so nice to see you on my page. Thank you. 🌹

            • Kevin Hulme

              My Pleasure.

            • Thomas W Case

              Clean and elemental—like a breath after something heavy finally loosens its grip.
              The grit is in the simplicity: light arriving without argument, just insistence.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you so much for seeing it my dear Thomas. 🌹



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