Haiku (an ode to positivity)

Teddy.15

 

Birth of a new day 

 

refreshing, bringing new light
 
 
dark has no place here. 
 
 
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  • sorenbarrett

    I love this one Teddy it is metaphoric as well as literal and nicely imaged

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Teddy

      • Katie B.

        I love a great Haiku! The say so much so succinctly. Perfect!

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear Katie B ๐ŸŒน

        • Demar Desu

          I will try my best todayโ€ฆ thank you for this great reminder

          • Teddy.15

            Dear Demar, thank you, if I make your day better by reminding you that's just makes my day. ๐ŸŒน

            • Demar Desu

              Hows Italy ?

              • Teddy.15

                It's wonderful here but like most of Europe we are on the edge of war. ๐ŸŒน

                • Demar Desu

                  Send me some spaghetti

                  • Demar Desu

                    No lasagna

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Amen. May it be so, dearest Teddy. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

                    • Teddy.15

                      Thank you dear Tristan.๐Ÿ’œ

                      • Tristan Robert Lange

                        Most welcome, my dear friend! ๐Ÿ’œ

                      • Kevin Hulme

                        This could mean many things. Peace being Light. And Darkness War.
                        We all need Light in our lives.
                        A fine Haiku.

                        • Teddy.15

                          Thank you dear Kevin so nice to see you on my page. Thank you. ๐ŸŒน

                          • Kevin Hulme

                            My Pleasure.

                          • Thomas W Case

                            Clean and elementalโ€”like a breath after something heavy finally loosens its grip.
                            The grit is in the simplicity: light arriving without argument, just insistence.

                            • Teddy.15

                              Thank you so much for seeing it my dear Thomas. ๐ŸŒน



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