just another brick in the wall

Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

there’s countries at war 

and me? I’m just… washing hands 

waiting for my soup 

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  • sorenbarrett

    We all wait for our soup and I am still waiting it has been on back order for years. Good write Demar

  • Abdullah123

    Loved it. Just had someone give me a sideye cuz i laughed out loud. Bravo

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Ah...the truth in this. A fave just for the juxtaposition alone. Powerful, my friend. The king of concise strikes again! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

  • Allie561

    Still working on the potato soup Demar, it’ll be out soon 😂



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