A gate wide open
A gate narrow for many
Which gate will you choose
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Author:
James Michael (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 12th, 2026 20:10
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Good write JM. Why must I use 50 words when 5 will do - sometimes?! lol.
The wide gate is easy, looks nice and cosy, many go through it. But it's only the narrow gate and path that leads to life, we know.
I though a Haiku was some sort of sneeze - Hai-choo! lol.
Use as many words as you’d like to get the point across. My poems have become shorter because my inspiration is shorter.
This one is definitely influenced by Matthew 7:13-14. We have the ability to choose which gate to go to.
This one has three lines and three sneezes!
Nicely said choices are constant and many.
I believe human beings have the intrinsic ability to feel the difference between right and wrong. The problem is outer influences.
Well said
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