scribble and erase
painting pictures with minds eye
wit creating gold.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: April 14th, 2026 03:51
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 49
- Users favorite of this poem: Priya Tomar, Demar Desu, Tristan Robert Lange, MendedFences27, Poetic Licence, GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀
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Comments9
Beautifully written ,
Thank you so much dear Priya 🌹
You are most welcome , sister
So often my mind's eye scribbles and erases but does not always create gold. Well done Teddy
Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret 🌹
You are most welcome my friend
Beautiful, sweet Teddy.
Thank you so much dear sweet Thomas 🌹
Teddy… I know that cycle…putting something down, pulling it back, shaping it again. This brings that rhythm through clearly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
And starting from scratch or changing every word leading to a new poem. 🤣 Thank you dear Tristan 🌹
An eye for painting. Wish I could say the same, but no such luck. The picture and poem are a lovely duo.
Thank you so much dear Phil. 🌹
Clever and thought provoking! Great write!
Thank you so much dear Katie. 🌹
You said it all. Some Poems I've erased and Hopefully: Published the Gold.
Fine Haiku.
Thank you so much dear Kevin. 🌹
Short but extremally well thought out, how we all would like to find that gold, enjoyed the read.
Thank you so much, great to see you. 🌹
Your very welcome
Why erase if it’s beautiful. Capture it as you have done and store it to look at in poetic or prose or as a painting 💅👌👏
Thank you dear NafisaSB I certainly won't be erasing this one. 🌹
that's good to know..
wishing more power to your pen, and more beautiful flights of imagination...
take care - stay safe, strong and happy
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