feet first to the heat
to the bathtub i retreat
rinse, relax--repeat
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flakyuniversity215 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: baths will never be obsolete
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Welcome to My Poetic Side, I love this. A fabulous senryu. 🌹
Lovely
Short and sweet now one has clean feet. I do not wish to take an hour so I prefer the shower. Well done
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