Great Green Wave

Mutley Ravishes



Atlantean echoes
Down the years
A remnant eases
Through Numenorian
Gears

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  • sorenbarrett

    Short and with good rhyme it flows. Well done

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks, Soren. The music helped, mightily!

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome, I am sure it did

      • arqios

        Lost knowledge regained opens doors left unopened and half-opened🙏🏻🕊️

        • Mutley Ravishes

          It sure does. How many mysteries are just waiting to be walked into?!

          • arqios

            Exciting 🙏🏻🕊🤩

          • Friendship

            nicely done

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Mutley, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it knocked me flat for a bit. That idea of something easing through gears…blending the ancient with the mechanical…that’s what really sticks for me. It gives the whole piece a strange, timeless motion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

            • Mutley Ravishes

              Thanks for your thoughts, Tristan. Ancient and mechanical, now there`s a thought! "Egyptian" pyramids, heiroglyphs and all that......



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