In your bid to find closure
Did you really get closer -
When you opened up your heart
And upset the apple cart..
Did not the gap now widen
And misery burst out
And it did it really bring forth
The relief you had sought :
For instead of peace
Just heartbreak was bought?
Learn then a lesson
To Move forward in peace
For only then
Will you find proper release..
Whatever be the consequence
And whatever is in fate
Slam shut, and lock up,
Misery’s woeful gate
Move forward –
Don’t look back
Forgive, if not forget
Do not cry, Do not mope
And do not ever fret..
Learn the lesson
that life is teaching you
understand the reasons
And pick up the cue
For if you do so
you will never rue
you will be wiser
and in future you will cope
And you will rarely in future,
have to sit and mope..
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Author:
safina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: lessons learnt
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Comments5
Powerful write on relationship..?
am glad you think so...
Advise given in poetic rhyme. Nicely written
thanks for the thumbs up...
Most welcome Nafisa
Superbly encouraging withing pandering. Most enjoyable. 🕊️🙏
glad you think so...
Safina, this hit me hard…there’s a steady, guiding voice here that feels like it’s trying to pull someone back from the edge. It carries both the sting and the resolve at the same time…like hard-earned wisdom speaking plainly. Strong piece, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
yes it's experience speaking - have learnt now not to dole advice that will fall on deaf ears anyway - lol
Direct, instructive, and steady—this reads like advice carved out of hard experience rather than theory.
The grit is in its simplicity: pain acknowledged, then pushed toward motion instead of collapse, even if it still echoes underneath.
you got it right - it is some little wisdom carved out of experience...thanks for the feedback
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