Cosmic Surgery

Mutley Ravishes

"My roots reach deep

Yet I`m light on my feet

I`m bitter and I`m sweet

I`ve been cosmically

Enhanced!"

Exclaimed the Monkey

King

(Almost unbelievingly)

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  • Friendship

    Nicely said.

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks for dropping by, Friendship.

    • sorenbarrett

      This evokes vivid images that one may take metaphorically or not. Well done

    • Thomas W Case

      Powerful work.

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      My friend, this carries that mix of playfulness and realization…there’s a grounded strength paired with something almost cosmic and unexpected. It’s light in tone but still lands with meaning. Really enjoyable piece, Mutley. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

      • Mutley Ravishes

        I was struggling with this one, until an injection of playfulness saved the day!

      • NafisaSB

        trying to visualize it...well said..

        • Mutley Ravishes

          That`s a good place to start! There are also training methodologies that bring on this state.....

          • NafisaSB

            hmm, will have to check them...



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