O sisters , adorn the bride
Her groom comes with all pride
From groves bring perfumes
All softness from new blooms
For her face blush of dawn
Hue. for eyes blue from ocean .
O sisters , sing rhymes sweet
Her groom comes , all streets greet
Sing her beauty , sing her grace
And the smile that adorns her face
Songs of hope , songs of golden dreams
musings of Gauri , sing sacred hymns
O sisters , step beside the bride
Her groom comes like king on ride
Crimson threads on her flesh
Whisper songs of amorous secrets
From sky stars bestow bless
May always chime your anklets .
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Priya Tomar (
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Nicely written.
Thank you so much .
A sunlit hymn with a subtle sensual tone ...
Hii ,
I'm glad to hear beautiful words from you .
It's deeply valued .
Priya, this carries such a beautiful, celebratory energy…like a moment held in song and movement. That detail of the anklets chiming stayed with me…so delicate and alive. It feels like a shared joy being lifted together. This lands as warm, graceful, and full of life. Beautifully written, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
I 'm glad to hear beautiful words from you .
Anklets are considered sacred in Indian Hindu traditions .
Thank you so much for interpretations .highly appreciated .
It is most interesting that in Christianity the Christ refers to himself as the groom and I wonder how many other religions use this metaphor. A most metaphorical poem so well written and celebratory as well as sacred. A fave
Thank you so much for read and fave .
It's deeply valued .
You are most welcome Priya
Nice
Thanks a lot for read and review .
It's Highly appreciated
evokes many images of the brides i have seen over the years...well done...
Thank you so much for read and review .
always welcome - take care..
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