I saw him as light,
With a single word
Enveloping me
As though his soul
Were the catalyst
Transforming life itself,
Into beauty and joy,
Love and truth,
Onyx, with the scarcest
Brush of amber
Each little passion
Softly illuminating
That shimmering gold
So deeply threaded
Throughout the corners
Of his heart.
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Author:
Kora (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
Some might say God others illumination created in this poem surreal. Nicely written and poetically painted
Thank you Soren ♥️
You are most welcome
Words elegantly annealed together. Would dearly like to know what he spoke...
"I search for myself in your words,
I find you at every turn of my thoughts.”
(Ahmad Faraz)
This is what he spoke 😊
Oh no, I am inconsolable - I cannot compete with an entity who in words of shimmering gold incorporates you into his thoughts...sob...
No competition Uncle Dave, you'll always be top of the pyramid 😎
You warm the cockles of an old fella's heart... Bless your cotton socks.
Lovely!
Thank you ♥️😊
Very vividly and harmoniously worded. Brilliant write
Thank you very much Abdullah 😊♥️
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