eat properly!

lunarchloedip

close your mouth

when you eat

learn how to navigate a fork

without scraping it against your teeth

take a breath in-between

 

when you are sat next to me

sucking salad leaves like ice cream

swirling the stems around your mouth

the moment you opened the box

i could see things going south

i am trying, really trying

not to lose my composure

and counting the seconds

until it is over

writing a bitter poem

so you remain unknowing

of my barely contained misophonic rage

 

why is it wet??

why does it squelch??

can you not sense me

internally screaming for help??

did you forget to floss this morning

and now do so with the prongs??

are you determined

to ensure every part of my day was wrong??

 

close your mouth

when you eat

do not gnash your teeth

i promise, i am doing

all that i can

to not gnash mine

in your direction

and upon reflection

it is just sound

 

but it is so loud

eat

properly!!

 

12:50pm - 22/04/26

  • Author: Chloe S (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2026 11:33
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Friendship

    nidely said

  • sorenbarrett

    Some of us were never taught proper manners as children and turned into gross adults. I learned late in life and have been paying the consequences ever since. At least now I understand what was never understood before. Well penned

    • lunarchloedip

      and i have absolute empathy for scenarios like that! but i get very easily frustrated at certain sounds and unfortunately eating is one 🙂 thanks for reading!

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome



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