"For Heaven's sake, Heart
Let me flow smoothly
Around the physiology!
Your smooth spirillic
Contractions and expansions
Are laboring under the weight
Of false assumptions
Ya numb-
-skull!"
Said Spirit
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Nicely done
Thank you!
Blood pressure normal monitoring for high and low. Nicely penned
That`s good to know!
Have a good day
My blood pressure is well maintained by my GP. It’s hard to be excited even when one wants to intentionally. Everything goes at a flowy pace. Not slow but unhurried either🕊️🙏🏻
I wonder what you mean by "GP"? Or am I reading too much into it? Anyways, those smooth muscles in the vascular system sure help out!
General Practitioner, my family physician 🕊️🙏
Your GP`s doing a good job!
He better! Or there'll be hell to pay😂🕊️🙏
Mutley, that line about laboring under false assumptions really stayed with me…that’s where it shifts from playful to something deeper. It lands clean and sticks. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Their weight becomes unbearable at some point, doesn't it? Cardiovascular disease epidemic.....
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