Tantalizing
Keep me longing for more
Oh I wish to have it all at once
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Author:
Cheesencrackers (Pseudonym) (
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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It is always best to never let the controlled become satiated a manufactures and Machiavellian code.
I can agree with you there Soren, want is a dangerous thing.
Allie, this carries that sharp edge of wanting without restraint…drawn in, reaching, not satisfied with distance or delay. That desire to have it all right now…that’s real. I’ve felt that pull too. You kept it simple and let it speak for itself. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
I’m really glad you could relate Tristan, thank you for the feedback!
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