There are some Eyesores Created by Man,
Those Wind Powered Turbines in the Briny they stand.
And with Human Effluent being pumped out to Sea,
We're heading I'm sure to a Catastrophe,
As any day now it will hit the old Fan.
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Author:
Kevin Hulme (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Humor
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A centrifugal trajectory of effluent projectiles! Not to take lightly the gravity of the message. 🕊️🙏
More effluent projectiles than a Election Speech.
Thank you for Reading.
Agreed
Why is it that we dump our shit in someone else's yard and call it clean
True . But it's these Turbines that I see .
Not just in the Sea , but along the Countryside.
Thank you for Reading.
You are most welcome
My advice has always been to stand behind the fan...However I am subject to severe seasickness ...I may well be in the shit here...
Afraid so. Thank you for Reading.
Kevin, this hit me hard…there’s a sharp edge to it that doesn’t try to soften the warning. It reads like frustration that’s been building for a while, and it lands clean. Straight to the point. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
'Hits Hard' 'Sharp edge' 'Lands Clean'. Quite a few Pun's in there on the Poem.
Thank you for Reading and your Comments.
Dryly satirical and slightly apocalyptic—you compress environmental frustration into a tight, punchy image set.
The grit is in that blunt final warning: engineered progress and waste colliding, with consequences left looming just offshore.
Yes, Thank you. And for Reading.
lol hilarious, kudos on your imagery and smells. 🌹
Glad you enjoyed it.
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