goldfish home

jim56

i saw a little goldfish swimming in a bowl
at the local fairground the poor little soul
he swam round round with very little room
going up and down in his little tomb
 
coming to the top to try and get his air
in his bowl so small it really wasnt fair
i took him home with me he looked very sad
i put in my pond this it made him glad
 
he could move around now he had the space
a proper goldfish home in a proper goldfish place
 
 
  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 27th, 2026 04:18
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    I believe I remember another goldfish poem of yours from long ago Jim this one is a good compliment to that one. Well done

    • jim56

      hi thanks for always lovely commentss
      means a lot jim

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome Jim

      • Katie B.

        Love it. Keep them coming.

        • jim56

          hi thanks katie for always lovely comments
          will keep them coming for you jim



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