One Days

Mutley Ravishes



Great reconciliation
Slow fermentation
Cosmic Identification

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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s something compressed here, like three lines holding way more than they let on. It is distilled and intentional. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • Mutley Ravishes

      It`s a slow fermentation, for sure! Thanks for dropping by.

    • Friendship

      Nicely said.

    • sorenbarrett

      Lying after lying, the rhyme keeps coming

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Soren, I`ve got no idea what you mean! I like your comment anyways.

        • sorenbarrett

          The first thing that struck me a double entendre to lie as in laying down or to lie as in untruthful, cause I took your poem as having double meaning as well.

          • Mutley Ravishes

            I see. Thanks for letting me know!

          • arqios

            Solid 🪨🕊️🙏

            • Mutley Ravishes

              Just like the Earth! Wait a minute, there`s folks saying form is emptiness, emptiness is....!

              • arqios

                Zen!

                • Mutley Ravishes

                  👏Wait a minute, there's two hands clapping. Shouldn't there be one?!



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