An Alert From The Past
Now A Future Clash
Speak Of Strong Feelings
For You Meant To Last
Possibilities, Too, Will Forever, Everlast
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Its My Fault, My Folly
Revealing Our Prosperity
Because Of My Treachery
Moreso My Kindness, I Gave Ground
Two For One We're Found
Toward A New Undying Century
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Thankfully The Choice Is Yours,
Left To You - Your True Course.
Perchance I'm Doomed. I've Brought More.
Patience, And See, What I've Got In Store
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When Faced In The Present
The Feeling Is Evident
Wield Virtue To Become Prevalent
And Time Will Prove Proper Precedence
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Belief Is The Key
And The Reward To Be.
[May 26, 2025]
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Author:
Joseph Michael Marek (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 28th, 2026 09:44
- Comment from author about the poem: This one came from feelings of thoughts deep, shameful, and also hopeful. If you don't understand any of my poetry, feel free to ask.
- Category: Surrealist
- Views: 5
- Users favorite of this poem: Friendship
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Comments2
nicely written. Your poem "In Exchange" revolves around the complexities of relationships, the interplay of choice and consequence, and the enduring nature of feelings despite past mistakes.
This poem was best described with being centered around stanza 3, line 3. Thank you very much for reading and your feedback, Friendship.
Stanza 2, lines 1 through 4 as well. And you hit your feedback correctly, too, if I would make clear. Stanza 3, line 3 is the main way to get an idea of what I wanted to get down.
most welcome
Much Appreciated. Perhaps I should try to not mix the order up in my poetry. I should work on that, thanks!
Belief is the key to virtually all things. Very nicely written my friend.
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