black clouds ragged sky
mountains covered in anger
sun's rainstorm of tears.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: April 29th, 2026 02:10
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 19
- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Demar Desu, Tristan Robert Lange
- In collections: Haiku.
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Comments3
A lovely haiku in a picture of personification. Well done my friend
I'm very sad but I know it will pass dear sorrenbarret, thank you my dear friend🌹
You are most welcome and may the sadness pass soon
After a Storm there's always a Bright Sunny day later. ❤️
Yes there is hopefully although not for the ones we grieve for. 🌹
Profound, my friend. This metaphor, though brief, has much to say. Well done, dearest Teddy!
Dear Tristan I'm just really sad at the moment it will pass and although this is really dark I put all my effort into sharing the grief in metaphor lol, I'm so glad it came through.Thank you my dear friend. 🤣
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