Leave it to Blake to spoil things between he and Bessy; after lunch they took a walk; and that’s where things got messy. Everything seemed to be going well until Blake asked her if she’s been dating since they split. Bessy said she met someone and that she dated him for about seven years; but he suddenly called it quits. Bessy told Blake that that’s where she had enough; she called on a higher power and accepted Gods love. Blake “jokingly mocked” her and her deep beliefs. Calling her a child again; causing Bessy grief. Bessy walked away without saying a word; just gave him a look of deep hurt. Tomorrow is the final chapter of this old fashioned delight story; I hope you will join me.
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Author:
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 (
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I enjoy your story. Nicely said.
Mocking someone’s beliefs is a sure way to cause upset. Nicely written.
Good write GS.
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