Duck
Empty hands,
poor duck.
With nothing
to give.
Heart,
so sad.
Duck and clumsy,
a famished sadness.
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Author:
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS (
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Comments4
Hey get in the water
I wish I could join the ducks in the water someday…
Never thought of a duck as famished. Metaphoric perhaps. Well done
Ducks are fascinating creatures; I love their presence. Thank you for commenting
Nicely done
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment on my words.
Welcome
Carlos, this carries a quiet, clumsy sadness that feels very real… stripped down and honest. The simplicity lets the feeling speak without anything getting in the way. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you very much for leaning in to my little poems and commenting on them
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