Dear, GOD!
If parents/elder's fears and concerns are chaining or cuffing the children either physically or mentally.
Is it called love?
If children's freedom and actions are burdening the parents either physically or mentally.
Is it called freedom?
love with a cage is nothing but a "loving cage."
Freedom with no responsibility is nothing. Making our "souls free" is important.
Oh! GOD!!
Please let my fellow humans into a place,
where love and freedom exist side by side,
where understanding bloom,
where ego dissolves,
Togetherness survives.
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Author:
Valluru (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: On a beautiful evening, when I was sitting on a bench in a park with a stunning river view in front of me, all my surrounding is filled with love and lovers. I can hear the sounds of love birds taking to their lovers in their own language (even birds are not single these days! except humans like me!!) All of sudden, I came to see a teenager shouting over in a phone call. Immediately, my curiosity kicked my butt to know 'what happened to that teenager' So, quietly like a cat I stood up and steeped towards this teenager. In a frustrating voice I heard, Teenager: Come on dad, you can't do this to me! Then few seconds silence continued....... Parents: I couldn't hear but it's definitely opposite, what the teenage child want. Teenager: You are making me to hate my life. I hate you then call ends! This made me think, what exactly parents want from children and what children want from parents. This is how these lines got birth and alive. I wish everyone connects to these lines. Keep smiling.
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Comments1
Wise and well written good advice and a prayer well said
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