ok picture us!
the host and two at the bar
no cash register
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 5th, 2026 09:06
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 5
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
ok picture us!
the host and two at the bar
no cash register
Offline)
Comments1
The king of concise strikes…short, but it lands with a strange kind of tension. It feels like a scene that’s missing something on purpose, and that absence does the work. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
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