They break from the huddle into open field,
Breath already pacing the rhythm of the touch.
A quick lateral opens sudden space,
The sideline shouting maps of unseen time.
Six chances only to earn the painted line,
Or else surrender the ball to the waiting side.
The winger ghosts along the narrow side,
Studying seams in the defensive field.
A fingertip grazes cloth before the line—
Reset. The referee counts the touch.
The clock does not forgive a wasted time,
Nor does a shrinking pocket of space.
A dummy pass invents a corridor of space,
Teammates looping wide to stretch the side.
Five now. The pressure folds the seconds of time.
The ball arcs shallow across the field,
Snatched mid-stride before another touch
Drives them backward from the stubborn line.
Four. A stutter step fractures the line,
For half a heartbeat there is daylight, space—
But hands arrive, a whispering touch.
Reset again; defenders crowd the side,
Closing angles, shrinking the field,
Each breath a measurement of time.
Three. Sweat beads like borrowed time.
The try zone gleams beyond the line,
A promise stretched across the grassed field.
The halfback darts through thinning space,
Draws two markers from the blind side,
Flings the ball before the tagging touch.
Two. One. The final feint evades the touch,
A sidestep stealing seconds from time.
Support arrives from the open side,
Diving low and long toward the line,
Carving one last ribbon of space
Across the width of the living field.
In this small republic of field and time,
Where every touch redraws the line of space,
Victory lives on the thinnest side of the line.
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Author:
Matthew R. Callies (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about touch football, a variation of gridiron football. For more context visit https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Touch_football_(American)
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Gripping but I can not help but feel a metaphor here as well. Life itself is such. Nicely written
Matthew, this is beautifully constructed. The poem balances athletic momentum with almost philosophical reflection on timing, limits, pressure, and opportunity. And that closing thought about victory living βon the thinnest side of the lineβ lands perfectly after everything that came before it. It brought back memories of playing two-hand touch football as a kid. Powerful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
Nice write
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