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Opinions are like bum holes.

 

My dear mum would say: everybody has one; and some like to display!

 

(The first will be last? Did I hear someone say...)

 

A controversial book: have a pèek; take a look...

 

But don't believe the commentary!

 

Commentary; common; love the stage. 

 

Rant! Rave! Misbehave!

 

Satan's on the loose..

 

From the pages; making cages; neck tie, now the noose.

 

Commentary: Ha!

 

Be the head, not the tail: send it with the draft: get some wind in your sails; come on, have a glass!

 

Pure milk: if desired, you only need to ask. 

 

You see:

 

While you still have tomorrow,  you can erase all of that past. 

 

Now, I don't want to be judge-mental, best not head up that creek; could take some paddling, and I haven't got a week. 

 

Or a day; or a moment to loose...

 

I've done my duty: now time for a snooze.

 

Fast or slow,  who sets the pace?

 

Peace on earth; life is great. 

 

 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 6th, 2026 09:17
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Great message and well written

  • Friendship

    Nicely written



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