Opinions are like bum holes.
My dear mum would say: everybody has one; and some like to display!
(The first will be last? Did I hear someone say...)
A controversial book: have a pèek; take a look...
But don't believe the commentary!
Commentary; common; love the stage.
Rant! Rave! Misbehave!
Satan's on the loose..
From the pages; making cages; neck tie, now the noose.
Commentary: Ha!
Be the head, not the tail: send it with the draft: get some wind in your sails; come on, have a glass!
Pure milk: if desired, you only need to ask.
You see:
While you still have tomorrow, you can erase all of that past.
Now, I don't want to be judge-mental, best not head up that creek; could take some paddling, and I haven't got a week.
Or a day; or a moment to loose...
I've done my duty: now time for a snooze.
Fast or slow, who sets the pace?
Peace on earth; life is great.
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Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 6th, 2026 09:17
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Great message and well written
Nicely written
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