eventually…
all the pain will go away
allows room for more
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 7th, 2026 08:18
- Category: Haiku
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lovely said🌹
I've really thought about it like this. Very astute. Getting rid of the pain only to make room for more well done
This one has a twist at the end brightness that allows more darkness. A good write Demar
Demar, there’s something deeply calming in this…a belief that pain is not the final architecture of the self. “Allows room for more” leaves the poem open in such a human and hopeful way. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Every closed door allows a new one to open,and honestly i need this advice myself!
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