Lost In Souls

Paul Bell

She fucks him

He’s fucking somebody else

They come together

Just different worlds apart

 

She stalks his dreams

He’s lost in her soul

Together apart

Apart together

 

She scratches her name deep inside him

He penetrates her mind

Mind-blowing

Just different worlds apart

 

She bares all

He caresses deep inside

But not deep enough

Not right into her soul

 

She screams injustice

He pulls away

Naked and pleading

Just different worlds apart

 

She dresses for the final time

He walks away

She goes back to him

They come together.

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  • sorenbarrett

    An interwoven metaphor of words and actions in this poem's seductive sex between verbs and nouns where adjectives come and go fogging adverbs memories. Well done Paul very creative

    • Paul Bell

      Happily apart together now.

      • sorenbarrett

        Now there is a duality

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Paul, I really felt the imbalance running through this…the longing for deeper connection while both people keep missing each other emotionally. The poem carries that ache clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Paul Bell

          Beats me why they don't just leave their partners.

        • Friendship

          Romance story, Your poem "Lost In Souls" revolves around the complexities of relationships, particularly the emotional and physical disconnect that can exist between intimate partners. The poet explores themes of love, longing, betrayal, and the duality of connection and separation. You painted a picture of how individuals can be deeply intertwined yet remain fundamentally distant, emphasizing the paradox of intimacy amid emotional estrangement. Nicely written, Paul

          • Paul Bell

            Getting together is easy, coming together a bit harder.

          • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

            A strange couple eh, they seem to be ambidextrous, sometimes passionate sometimes not about each other. Kudos for a sensational poem!
            Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

            • Paul Bell

              Not a happy couple. lol



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