"My heart`s lighter
Than a feather
Yet I got the heart
Of a warrior!"
Exclaimed the Monkey King
To the crowd
From his cloud
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Short but it speaks in metaphor of incongruities resolved and of power from above. Well written
Thanks, Soren.
You are most welcome
Nicely said.
Your nicelys are welcome!
Rik, what a quietly masterful poem this is. The atmosphere feels tangible from the opening lines...cold latch, muttering radio, metal-grey yard...and then the Vermeer turn deepens everything beautifully. By the end, the room itself feels alive again through light and memory. “Light, remembers waking” is such a soft but profound closing image. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Tristan, are you okay?!
This is a clear message of bravery!
Thank you! A fearful heart feels a lot heavier than a brave one.
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