Woke up this morning
A sharp pain in my head
Want to get up
But lye there instead.
The room was spinning
My thoughts insane
Living this life
Is living in vain.
I think of you daily
I miss hearing your voice
It’s not as though
I was given a choice.
I exist living
Inside my own shell
Some say its Heaven
I call it Hell.
I saw the sky crying
And wished you were here
Day turned to night
With a drop of a tear.
So, here I am
Still in bed
Want to get up
But lye here instead.
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A feeling that I have had, so central to feeling a poem. It seems that I have been there and that is lovely
Thank you friend.
You are most welcome
Nice write!!
thank you.
My friend, I know that feeling of grief turning the simplest thing…like getting out of bed…into climbing a mountain. This captures that numb heaviness so clearly. The repetition at the end especially feels like the cycle starting all over again. Powerful write, teardrop. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Hello friend. Thank you for reading me and truly understanding my words, Your imput means a lot to me.
lovely write
Thank you
Not sure if this is love lost, or death, but the pain resonates.
Life dictates you move on, and as humans, you must.
Very moving and heartbreaking 🤔beautiful weite
Very moving and beautiful write
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