Religion ...
the great distraction
Redemption ...
a grand surmise
Belief
in something outward bound
His essence
— deep inside
(Dreamsleep: May, 2026)
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Author:
Kurt Philip Behm (
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This may be taken different ways Kurt but I take it to mean God and redemption lies within us. Well written my friend
Amen, thanks.
Most welcome Kurt
Great thought and so eloquently stated.
Many thanks again.
true understanding and redemption lie within oneself.
Blessings, thanks.
Kurt, this really struck me. Short, sharp, and stripped down to essentials. The poem feels like it’s peeling away layers of inherited thought until only the inner self remains standing there in silence. Powerful little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thanks. Most people look in the wrong direction.
Splendid write Kurt 🕊️🙏
Thanks so much.
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