I am the rain that never ceases.
I am the Monsoon that will drown you.
There is evil in your diseases,
That I have placed there to hurt you.
I will never speak or let you see me,
I will just burn you with too much Sun,
I will kill your loved ones in misery.
Don’t run you cannot hide until I’m done.
The Black night is my domain, be careful,
There is wickedness in your way.
Look not to the moon to be cheerful,
I will not answer you when you pray.
Cut yourself and I will be there,
I will take your life when it pleases.
Of all the troubles in the air,
I am the rain that never ceases.
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Author:
David Wakeling (
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A dark poem that feels demonic in some way and yet part of nature and maybe oneself. Nicely written in good rhyme it flows as the streams in flood season. Nicely done David
Nature can seem demonic at times.Thank you for your insightful comments.Always appreciated
You are most welcome David
The dark side of nature is so much darker than we truly realise. 🕊️🙏
Yes indeed like Tidal Waves and Tornados.Thanks for reading compadre
Oh, the face of malevolence! That they are 🌪️🌊🙏🕊️
Powerful and ominous. Well penned!
Thank you so much for commenting
Nicely done. Your poem revolves around the concepts of illness, grief, and the inevitability of suffering. The poet personifies natural forces—rain, monsoon, sun, and night—as entities that inflict harm and misery on humanity.
Thank you for your insightful critique. Mucho appreciado mi amigo
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