What if the end was a paradox, would that be a shame?
If the winners were the losers'
I this life they think a game.
Where the poor and
downtrodden
Settle their score
Sounds like Insanity?
They will tremble
When He
Roars.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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Valiantstar, “If the winners were the losers” is such a strong pivot point because it immediately reframes the entire poem around reversal and reckoning. The sparse structure afterward gives the final roar imagery even more impact. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
There is a deeply religious belief encapsulated in this poem of a leveling of the field and implementation of justice in the end. Well written
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