Who's
Better
Different
Who understands
What life may throw you
What might be your hand
By choices made
Fall or stand
Who will
Be...
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 29th, 2026 08:01
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Comments4
Quite a question posed here. Nicely written
The man who has not yet arrived, well aware of his corruptibility, dying daily to self, and daily aiming for his Goal.
Valiantstar, I like how this feels unfinished in the best possible way. The poem asks questions without rushing toward answers, leaving the reader to sit with them. There is a quiet humility in that approach. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
That's very kind of you...
If only we had the answer(s). Great write..
What did he say? Seek and you will find.
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