Too long

Alan R

I sat for too long

And yet somehow, time didn’t move

And yet somehow I grew

Old and out of

Everything that once mattered

 

I sat for too long

And yet somehow my feet are sore

And yet somehow I moved

Through and out of

Everything that has shattered.

 

-Al

  • Author: Alan R (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 3rd, 2026 03:57
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 20
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, arqios
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  • sorenbarrett

    Alan this poem captures in its brevity the two aspects necessary for moving on that of leaving behind and movement forward so nicely conceptualized in poetic form and metaphor. Well done and a fave

    • Alan R

      Thankyou soo much for your support and i am glad you understand and appreciate it πŸ™‚

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Alan

      • arqios

        A definite Fave. Good stuff here, AlanπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

        • Alan R

          Thanks a lot πŸ™‚



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