Razed Right

Mutley Ravishes


What precisely
Is in the rays?
Aimed at impurities
Going up in
Your flames strengthen
The thirty seven
Trillion constellation
In the first rays
Of the sun`s gaze
Enlivened

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  • sorenbarrett

    Magnificent is the grandeur of the skies it is in waves that light and beauty come. Even heat is waves and so are we all. Well written

    • Mutley Ravishes

      It sure is! Nothing like an early morning/evening gaze.....

      • sorenbarrett

        Nice

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Mutley, this hit me as both cosmic and intimate at the same time. The movement from sunlight to the vast constellation within the human body gives it a sense of wonder that I really enjoyed. There is something quietly uplifting about this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Mutley Ravishes

          Thanks for dropping by, Tristan. What's in those rays?!



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