FALLING STARS ✨

antra.coree

If you must fall,

Then fall like a shooting star—

So that even those who watch you fall

Still find you beautiful.

People love

Watching shooting stars fall,

But only to watch them—

Not to catch them.

And then there is you...

Sitting there, hoping

That those people might piece you back together.

But they are only watching your fall

While making wishes of their own.

So if you must fall,

Don't fall for their eyes.

Fall for yourself—

So that you can rise again.

Break in a way

That keeps shining,

And hold a silence

That echoes for a long time.

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  • peto

    Thoroughly enjoyed the read
    The ending is dynamite
    Looking forward to reading more from you

    • antra.coree

      Thank youuu, will try to post more!

    • sorenbarrett

      A poem that reads like a proverb holding good advice in poetic form. Nicely written and imaged.

      • antra.coree

        Thanks for your kind words!

        • sorenbarrett

          You are most welcome



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