Dear Holy Spirit , I need you to hear me
please erase the pain in this world and set us all free,
free from the demons and free from our chains,
that bind us to this world - before only ashes remains,
the chains that bind us are holding us in a fiery state,
attempting to hold us here filled with hate,
I know this place isn’t what it was meant to be,
it’s all dark and twisted- and the only world Satan wants us to see,
Dear Holy Spirit - I long for peace and love
the only way to achieve that is through Heaven above ,
I cannot imagine the strength and power of Gods grace,
for now I will endure the torment and suffering of this horrid place,
Dear Holy Spirit - lead me to my heart and souls fate,
I pray it’s with my Father waiting for me at Heavens Gate
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Belief in a poem faith in a rhyme in this poem. Nicely said
Thank you my friend
You are most welcome
I know that it is hard sometimes, my Butterfly. That is why we must keep the faith.
Something my niece said made this piece come to me
What was that, my love? ... if you don't mind sharing.
She was questioning Gods existence and asking why He was never there for her - so I wrote this piece as her crying out to God
That is good that you are sharing your knowledge and experience with GOD and that you are being straightforward with her, my love.
Persistence is key
🥰🥰
I know that I am not the most perfect man, but through Christ's salvation, I know that I will be with HIM when I leave this earth.
... and I am so fortunate to have you love me, and I love you so much too.
Persistence is key
Good write B.
Thank you Orcji
It's beautiful. I'm sure God will free us from sin and negativity.
I know that He will — our sorrows are only for a short time
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