The child has gone
Such a long time
They searched everywhere
But something told them
The child has gone
They started looking inwards
Watching expressions
Looking for that clue
So strange, nothing
The child has gone
Days turned to weeks
Nothing
Nationwide alert
Calls came in, including the cranks
The child has gone
The search died down
Talk spread
Children stayed indoors
Fear became the byword
She watched from within the large tree
Her secret hiding place
It was fun
The earth collapsed, pulling her under
She tried to scream
Too late
The child has gone.
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Comments3
A wonderful poem with a powerful message that can be taken multiple ways depending on you point of view. One parents should watch more closely, two the world is a dangerous place children need close supervision, three the child in playing a joke had it backfire and justice was served. I prefer to see it as a most unfortunate set of circumstances that should be shared with other children to avoid future problems. Well done
Yeah, sometimes parents should look through the childs eyes.
Everything is to be investigated when you're a child, and sadly danger lurks.
A difficult balance to be a parent.
You tell a story like no other on here paul
This one is captivating
My fav line rather worryingly is
"Including the cranks "
Magic
Cranks, what would we do without them.
Powerful and pognant.
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