if Eve was Adam's equal,
why must she submit?
why when we say "mankind"
do we only mean men?
I could wait for something greater,
using signals to transmit.
you aren't your body,
why be defined by it then?
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𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 (
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Well rhymed and written. Nicely done
Thank you
You are most welcome
I really like this Hayleigh.
Short and very sharp.
- Syd
thanks!
Hayleigh, that closing question really landed with me, my friend. 😄 "You aren't your body, why be defined by it then?" is one of those lines that keeps echoing after the poem ends. Thought-provoking write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
thank you
why indeed..endorse your query..
EXCELLENT... be the change
Question everything
and teach the children
Something to do with the rib I gave you, putting me on a higher plane.
Not forgetting how I direct you without using a map.
Apart from that, women usually rule cos they know where everything is.
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