when the sun is shining

jim56

when the sun is shining i walk along the shore 
time for happiness the sun is out once more
children on the beach building castles in the sun
with a bucket and  spade having so much fun

 

bringing back the memories wakes the child in me
of my younger days how it used to be
strolling on the shore ice cream in my hand
having lots of fun playing  in the sand

 

paddling in the sea with my mum and dad
best days in my life that i ever had
when i see the sunshine sending down its rays
brings back my memories of my childhood days

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 12th, 2026 03:54
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  • sorenbarrett

    Reflections in memory's pond of a past that was bright and warm now stimulated by suns rays. A lovely poem Jim

    • jim56

      thanks for always lovely comments
      means a lot jim

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome

      • NafisaSB

        I am sure many of us will share these sentiments 👏

        • jim56

          thanks for comment jim



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