It was raining when I first saw you.
Rushing home, I lost sight of you.
You were dressed in noir; it looked very nice on you.
In the same place once again, I wrote my name before yours, and you wrote yours after mine.
I wonder if you've noticed— the little smile :) I draw whenever our clock cares to align.
A quiet source of delight.💛
I don't know if you saw me dance that day, embarrassed at that party, but everything changed when you offered me a helping hand.
I looked at you, and suddenly my heart had forgotten how to stay quiet.
I tried.
Third time's a charm?
I lost the first person and said goodbye to the second.
Perhaps I'm only lost, uncertain of what this is.
What you didn't know was this: I saw you long before you saw me.
Now I look away, leave the room, and pretend otherwise,
but you are a welcome sight on any day.
I don't know how to feel this again.
Bewildered by the way things align, in music, in films, in characters.
Good heavens!
Do you notice them too?
Am I imagining this too much?
Will anything change?
Is it one-sided?
Or is third time simply another failure?
Questions linger, and I overthink them all.
But time will tell whether these feelings will quietly fade,
or stay.
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Author:
umi chan (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Perhaps what makes a person memorable is not grand gestures, but the ordinary moments we never expected to keep. A greeting, a conversation, a helping hand, or simply being there at the right time. This poem was not written to seek answers. It is a collection of moments, questions, and quiet observations. Some people may never realize the impact they have on others. Yet their kindness, presence, and sincerity can become cherished memories in someone else's story. And perhaps that is enough...
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It is so true that we do not notice the impact we make on others for good or ill. Nicely written
Reading this rushed so many memories of my own; this writing surely made me smile. Well written.
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